Ok, thank you for all your answer, I'll try the changes that you suggested and I'll try to resubmit her!

EDIT: I did what you said! Less lashes in stages 1 and 2, skin tone that changes (more) only in stages 4 and 5, and no leaves on stage 1 hair I hope that it will be enough, if not... I'll see if I can add something!

amalath wrote:

My suggestion:
I'd change the first stage. Make him wear only shorts.
Second: tshirt from first stage+long pants+small one element wings (like... only their upper part)
Third: long sleeve shirt+bigger, 2 element wings(way they are now)+headband and shoes + something more(?)
Fourth: big wings+jacket (3rd stage one)+face change+something more(?)
Fifth: keeping most way it is now + new elements(?)

There are some things you could improve. His hair and pants could use some changes. Starting from simple hair and changing in next stages, same goes with pants, they could use more variety, you can also play more with colors, like skin getting darker in later (starting from 3rd or 4th) stages.

I'm not sure about those sparkle things. I think they go against clear-cut rule?

Aah, I never thought about only putting one wing...I forgot about that. XD
The reason why I gave him a shirt and wings at the first stage was because of two reasons: 1, I don't know how to draw him without a shirt, and 2, I was thinking that the wings will stir people to buying it. First impressions are always important, right? Ah, well, I'll go through your suggestions with the ones my little sister suggested and see what I come up with. XD

Thanks for the help!

amalath wrote:

They can stay there, but then you'd have to think about making all next stages more complex. Right now most of the elements doesn't evolve enough to give variety through all 5 stages.

Mm, yeah. Now I know that the changes have you be much bigger. I'll work on him tomorrow and post it here...eventually.

My Knuffel Waldo was just rejected for the reason of relocating items and such. I understand that, I've indeed failed to see that rule and I'll be working on it to fix him.

In the mean time I had another Knuffel ready to be released, Wilbur.
Before submitting him I checked his stages and noticed that I did 'relocate' some items on him as well. In the first three stages he's got goggles on his helmet, and in the fourth stage those are put on because he's 'ready to take off'. In the second stage he gets a scarf, but when his engine is started in stage 5, it looks really silly to keep the scarf the same, and letting it flap in the wind of the engine makes it look more energetic and everything. Is this considered the rule-breaking relocating items? I don't want to have another one rejected for the same reason.

[Stage 1]
[Stage 2]
[Stage 3]
[Stage 4]
[Stage 5]

Awww okay, thanks!
Then I'll submit it like this. <3

l-lappy: Yeah, I feel like stage 1-2 could need slightly bit more change, but as long as this is limited to single stages it is alright for me to approve them. Just don't like to approve Knuffel that lack change in several stages. So, yeah, I guess I would approve it like this, thank you for going through the effort of editing it.

~Thanks Firn,
I've tweak a few lines I noticed in the first stage and noticed 2nd stage hand was transparent for some reason.

I'm going to keep in mind in the future with the starting stages
less = more.

And try and make more of a change with the outfit with each stage.