xD well what i meant more was that god was thankful to Gabriel for defeating all of the demons, and he saw how in love with Destiny he was, so to reward Gabriel in a way she was reborn as an angel so she can be with him for eternity :3

Oh I see! That makes sense now XD Yesh good ending ^^

yay :D so beginning, middle somewhat (partial storyline) and ending done xD

Yay! Now you just have to write the rest of it XD Which shouldn't be too bad right? How long do you think it'll be? Do you have a length you're shooting for?

i'd like to be atleast 100 pages, i'd like to be more but that might not happen since it's my first attempt xD

i'm thinking it'll be geared towards young adults though o:

That's what I was thinking. It reminded me of those teen romance novels, but much more readable ^^ 100 pages is a good length and if you don't write enough the first time through there's always the editing phase where you can add more. That's what editing is for! Reading back through what you wrote and rewriting most of it XD That's why I try not to edit mine until I finish the story. Therefore I never get a chance to edit it. Ha. What are you going to do with your story when you finish it?

I'd love to try to sell it, but I'm not sure who to get to proofread it. I know my boyfriend would just poke and tease at me.... because he's an english major so he'd be great but I still don't want to be teased about something I was passionate over -w-;

Your book sounds romantic I'd say keep working on that on your break and I can help with the guide if out need it :3

I don't have too much of a drive either: I don't want to feed my knuffels too much. X.X

I'm sorry those words hurt and then people came on here a day after asking about the very same thing and I'm like gee >>

I know how you feel at least

Oh yeah don't give it to him then :x He's probably like my brother and only likes "manly" things. Like axes and cars and stuff. I can proofread it if you want. I'm not an english major, but I can at least look for misspellings and such. He can read it after you get it finalized and put up ^^ Then you can be like "Ha I'm a published writer now. With fans." XD

@Ceres Hai Techno Bunny!

Hai rixis how is you?

Boyfriend never wanted to read my writings I think he did once and then decided its so full of passion he'd quit XD.

I keep rewritingthem though XD