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Re: Starkad's Todo list

Posted: Jun 4th, '10, 16:33
by Syl3nnxtorm
I too found a typo, but I'm not sure if they were or they weren't =)
The King and the Queen are the rulers if the Kingdom Of Knuffel.

Should the if be of?

But I gotta admit I like the story! <3

Re: Starkad's Todo list

Posted: Jun 4th, '10, 16:36
by Syl3nnxtorm
There seems to be so many typos, sorry for more work :(
But I found another in the Story page as well :(
[About Feanor]
Feänor is the shop keeper of The Family Jewels on the Kingdom Of Knuffel. He comes from an ancient family of noble Dark Elves and is several hundret years of age. He loves nature and lives in a tree house with his pet, the hamster Ulric.

Hundret should be hundred?

Re: Starkad's Todo list

Posted: Jun 4th, '10, 18:13
by Amura
The King and the Queen are the rulers if the Kingdom Of Knuffel. While the Queen is known for her gentle and wise nature, the king is feared for his bearish and moody character and his outbursts of fury. With skills and cleverness the Queen knows well how to overrul her husband and is the real ruler of the Kingdom, reigning with love and wisdom.

Overrule has a final e.

Lyera is the hairdresser and owner of the Kingdom's hairdresser's shop The Cutting Crew. She is of middle age and of calm and responsible characher which is why, on behalf of the Queen, she is spending some of her free time secretly keeping an eye on Walla, which is why she cann often be found sneaking behind Walla and her friends, never short of an excuse when caught.

Notice the double n.

Re: Starkad's Todo list

Posted: Jun 4th, '10, 18:18
by Kimbo
The things that are coloured red and underlined, are the things that changed c;
Lyera is the hairdresser and owner of the Kingdom's hairdresser's shop, The Cutting Crew. She is of middle age and of calm and responsible characher which is why, on behalf of the Queen, she is spending some of her free time secretly keeping an eye on Walla, which is why she cann often be found sneaking behind Walla and her friends, never short of an excuse when caught.


Nympharia is the shop owner of the Kindom's Treasure Trove, which is located at the shore. She rarely leaves her water home and seldom interacts with other inhabitants that don’t live in the ocean. But whenever she meets other residents of the Kingdom she is always kind and polite. Nympharia spends most of her free time with singing, pearl-diving, playing with her dolphin friends or simply combing her hair for hours.


Lucretia, Peppe, Walla and Gigi connects an inseparable bound of friendship and despite the great differences in personallities they are rarely seen apart. Lucretia is the shop keeper of Lunatic Fringe, while the seemingly always cheerful Gigi runs Purikura. She is sercretly in love with Peppe, the owner of the Kingdom’s trading center, The Vault. Together with Walla, the King’s and Queen’s daughter, they are always full of mischief and open for any kind of reckless adventure.


*Removed the T in LucTretia

Igor is the keeper of the Kingdom's Gene Technology Laboratory Rikashitsu. He himself is the product of several genetic experiments and devotes his life to the research of gene technology which allows the habitants of the Kingdom to alter their visual appearance permanently. Tifunee is his long-distance cousin and the keeper of the Kingdom's Knuffel Adoption Agency, Knufftropolis where she tries to find a caring owner for every Knuffel.

Re: Starkad's Todo list

Posted: Jun 4th, '10, 18:31
by Dream-Baby
Together with Walla, the King’s and Queen’s taughter,

I don't know what a taughter is so I asume it should be daughter.

edit; seems kimbo also remarked this.

Re: Starkad's Todo list

Posted: Jun 4th, '10, 18:37
by Amura
@Dream: phantorn already reported that one in the previous page "mchappy"

Re: Starkad's Todo list

Posted: Jun 4th, '10, 18:45
by Dream-Baby
@Amura; not just phantorn, also Kimbo.
I decided to post it here the moment I saw the mistake. After I did I read that others already noticed them aswell.
+ in your second example you mention something about a double n, but I am unable to find it in your example. maybe you could highlight it to make it more noticeble. :mccute:

Edit; Found it.
Lyera is the hairdresser and owner of the Kingdom's hairdresser's shop, The Cutting Crew. She is of middle age and of calm and responsible characher which is why, on behalf of the Queen, she is spending some of her free time secretly keeping an eye on Walla, which is why she cann often be found sneaking behind Walla and her friends, never short of an excuse when caught.

Re: Starkad's Todo list

Posted: Jun 4th, '10, 18:48
by Amura
I bolded words with typos but it seems it was not clear enought and I colored red as well.
Thank you Dream for you advice "mchappy"

Re: Starkad's Todo list

Posted: Jun 4th, '10, 18:50
by Dream-Baby
No Thank's. That's where this thread is for, to help Firn, Starkad and thusfore every person on this site.

Re: Starkad's Todo list

Posted: Jun 4th, '10, 20:21
by Popodoki
i don't know if anyone's mentioned these before so i thought i'd help ;3

Lucretia, Peppe, Walla and Gigi connects an inseparable bound of friendship and despite the great differences in personallities they are rarely seen apart.


long red line, but is it just me or does that sentence structure seem weird?

maybe it should be more like 'Lucretia, Peppe, Walla and Gigi are connected by an inseperable bound of friendship' ?

if it's me, sorry xD;;

Race: S’hroom


i don't know if this was purposely, but shouldn't it be SHROOM, no ' ?

the rest has been said already i think, also if these also've been said, again sorry xD;;