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Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 7th, '12, 21:09
by qt stripes
l-lappy wrote:l-lappy: Yeah, I feel like stage 1-2 could need slightly bit more change, but as long as this is limited to single stages it is alright for me to approve them. Just don't like to approve Knuffel that lack change in several stages. So, yeah, I guess I would approve it like this, thank you for going through the effort of editing it.
~Thanks Firn,I've tweak a few lines I noticed in the first stage and noticed 2nd stage hand was transparent for some reason.
I'm going to keep in mind in the future with the starting stages
less = more.
And try and make more of a change with the outfit with each stage. 
I can't wait to adopt her she is so adorable
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 8th, '12, 00:10
by Merrymaking
Him.
We're talking Sandor here, right? :p
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 9th, '12, 13:46
by The Rasmus
♫♪ A man dies like a butterfly
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⊱ I need help with my Knuffel:
"At least one of the stages is too similar to the previous / next. The Knuffel should evolve more noticably.
Stage 1-3"
Here are the stages:1 2 3 4 5
What should I do?
Please help me I don't know what to do...
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The world lies in the hands of evil
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Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 9th, '12, 19:02
by amalath
Second stage link doesn't work ^^'
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 9th, '12, 19:06
by The Rasmus
♫♪ A man dies like a butterfly
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⊱ Fixed ^^ ⊰
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Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 9th, '12, 19:17
by Flash
maybe make her hair grow.
it'd be awesome if she had looong hair
or start off even shorter :)
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 9th, '12, 19:20
by The Rasmus
♫♪ A man dies like a butterfly
Life burns from the touch of the reaper
All things must pass ♪♫
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⊱ I'll try ^^ Thanks!! :) ⊰
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♫♪ One love is a crooked lie
The world lies in the hands of evil
We pray it would last ♪♫
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 9th, '12, 19:24
by Flash
okay good luck. i really like her by the way :)
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 9th, '12, 19:42
by ml1201
Flash wrote:maybe make her hair grow.
it'd be awesome if she had looong hair
or start off even shorter :)
I agree with Flash, easiest thing to do it make the hair grow longer as they evolve.
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 9th, '12, 19:48
by amalath
I really like her design, but also agree with what other said: it bothers me how base stays almost the same through all stages. Hair and things like skin color give lots of options to add changes into knuffel (and it's the whole knuffel that should evolve in general) and playing with elements like hair make evolving much easier.
You can also try working with what you have already. Her second stage does need at least one more visable change or new, big element. You can try balancing elements you have already, for example:
1-2: adding 3rd stage shoes to make change bigger
2-3: adding more details to shoes and forehead eyes + something more?
3-4: adding basic shape of gloves + something more?
and then think about something new you can add to final stage (web hanging from spider legs for example, richer hair ornament) . Basically, right now she looks like if you could just kick out second stage and then all she would need is adding fifth one.
