Hello *pops in* just going to drop by before I go eat. Right now my head's killing me o.o (never good) I found the stories interesting. A bit confusing, but interesting XD I want wings, who wouldn't want wings. And I'm pretty short... so >,> maybe I'll grow wings. 8D We'll just have to wait and see. Lot of big paragraphs though @_@ My head hurts when I tend to half to read giant long paragraphs. Maybe you could have split the first one down to like 2 or three. Easier to read (at least for me) and keep track of what's going on.

Niiice. I'll be looking forward to the chapters. ^^ And, it's good if the reader can't figure out how something ends. For me, at least. I hate predictable endings.

Oh, I forgot to mention: I love your poll. It's probably my favorite moment in Teen Titans.

Hello, Springflora! ^^ -waves- I hope your head feels better.

Also, if you've read Harry Potter, I recommend Totenveleron's writing contest. She's not kidding about the 300,000 FPs for people who get first place. ;D

Okay, I'll be waiting for your story, then. Maybe to help with the story to not feel so bunched up (I was actually able to move past it for your work, which is sort of unusual) you could use Enter twice whenever you make a new paragraph.

But you're copy+pasting this from Word, huh? So then it'd be extra work to go back and double Enter each paragraph later. Oh, wait! Maybe you can submit it to Google docs or similar. :D

Yay for ramblers, I ramble so much when I'm writing. T_T it never funny especially when I see like a half a page of just one paragraph... Then when I finish and try to cut down on some of it, I find I kind of like everything there.

What do see about 300,000 FPs >,> I has to go find that *goes to search cause she's broke T_T* I'll be back in... as soon as find that 300,000 FPs $.$

Maybe it's just me, but I find it hard to ramble in writing. I wanna get my point across - not in English essays, though, that have a page minimum - and get through the story. I like leaving a lot of things to people's imaginations; a person can make a setting as homey or intimidating as they like, most of the time.

Springflora wrote:What do see about 300,000 FPs >,> I has to go find that *goes to search cause she's broke T_T* I'll be back in... as soon as find that 300,000 FPs $.$

-prods signature 'til there's a hole in it- ... -duct tapes it up-

Oh, guys, I found this funny comic :

Muffins! :D

Hey all, hows it going! .

Hello! Doing all right. Reading webcomics, posting around to eat some ice cream before my vacation starts tomorrow. How about you?

Also, I don't think we've chatted before, so I'm Rexan, Dino, Romi, Roaming, or almost whatever you want to call me. What do you go by, usually?

wow my thread is popular today yay!

Yeah i might have to go through after I copy and paste my stories and redo the spacing because the giant wall of text is even bugging me a bit and i tend to have a high tolerance to stuff like that.

I'm very straight to the point in essays but in stories I want people to see what I see so I describe everything.

Hey Alariananna. Welcome.

Oh and forgive my rudeness Flora but it seems I didn't welcome you either. Welcome to my little hangout.

I love this comic Jellyfish