Hey guys! how's this guy look to you? obviously he'll need to evolve- this is the final stage. Does he look the right size/shape though? A lot of my previous knuffels got rejected for not being correctly placed, I thought I might as well ask now.

Also, does anyone want to suggest a colour scheme?

ml1201 wrote:I'm assuming he's not going to have his wings or tail in the first stage, so that would leave it a bit unbalanced on the bottom half where the tail is. I don't know what to suggest on a way to fix that without you having to redrawn him from scratch.

He is going to have slightly less poofy hair. So that should help.

I see greens and teals.

If that's the final stage, I'm not sure if that's going to be enough evolutions. Seems quite simple.

There's a little more detail in now that the colours are blocked in... the little maple-key wings he has will get detailed in a bit more, too.
So here's the basic outline as I see it.

Stage one- stubble-ey hair all over his head in light silver,
shorts red with a silver band along the top, otherwise naked.
Closed eyes, mouth open in a little o.
Possibly little nipples.... thoughts?
round ears like a normal person.

Stage two-
Eyes open, but they're normal, bluer green.
hair grows out to little spikes on top of head.
tank top appears, mint green and tucked into the band at the top of the shorts
silver flats
ears get a tiny bit pointier
Tiny, thin tail appears

Stage three-
more vibrant green, smaller pair of keys appear.
tail is now about half the current length and has the pen-nib end.
Ankle-length shoes.
Tights tucked into the shoes, red.
tank top becomes a tunic, collar just to the neck.
Shite band becomes silver
green ribbon around the neck
little red stripe on the lip appears
hair is basically a billowy bowl cut.

Stage four-
hair falls to chin
secondary pair of keys appears below the first
eyes start shifting colour
silver band becomes as broad as final
hands morph to points and get red tips
shoes become boots
tail is sull-length
ears get pointier
Bracelet appears, w/out bells
mouth closes into a smile

Stage five-
Hair full length
ears get pointier
beads on tail.
bells on bracelet
keys grow out to full, become their final colour.
arm tattoo comes in
eyes are lined a bit more than in the picture.
pants puff out, get some kind of pattern- ideas?
pattern appears on band, beads on top of it.
Necklace
pattern on the sides of the tunic and neck of the tunic rises
same pattern as tunic on the tops of the boots.

mishamonkey wrote:

Hey guys! how's this guy look to you? obviously he'll need to evolve- this is the final stage. Does he look the right size/shape though? A lot of my previous knuffels got rejected for not being correctly placed, I thought I might as well ask now.

Also, does anyone want to suggest a colour scheme?

It's impossible to tell whether he will have the right proportion from the final stage, because the first stage need to have the right proportion already.
Also, if this is the final stage, I have my doubts that he will evolve properly, seeing as I don't know what besides wings and tail and maybe a piece of clothing he might have as evolving elements.
But it is really hard to tell for sure with just one stage.

I accidently put stars as a background.
Do I take off the stars and then resubmit it?

be-sue v2 wrote:I accidently put stars as a background.
Do I take off the stars and then resubmit it?

The stars are not okay, I already rejected the Knuffel, but there is also some whitish hue around it (I guess this is a mistake), which you need to remove and you need to add a few more bigger changes as just adding small things like a belt and jewellery isn't enough evolution per stage.
But I think your Knuffel could be easily fixed with a few more changes.