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Re: Awful Stuff
Posted: Oct 18th, '13, 11:36
by verm
I like the first two lines because they're four syllables each. And the last one too.
Not sure about the third and fourth though... but then again, I'm a really big sucker for syllable symmetry.
Re: Awful Stuff
Posted: Oct 18th, '13, 19:26
by Tanikah
I want more!
Re: Awful Stuff
Posted: Oct 19th, '13, 05:35
by OneHope
CUTE XD
Re: Awful Stuff
Posted: Oct 27th, '13, 02:29
by Lady Siobhan
That was kind of cute. Lines three and four bother me a little, but it was cute.
Re: Awful Stuff
Posted: Oct 28th, '13, 07:46
by blad
Haha, cute. I don't write silly poems, so it's better than what I could come up with.
Re: Awful Stuff
Posted: Oct 29th, '13, 11:51
by AngelWhite
This is my kind of poetry, not too short, not too long and definitely not boring.
Re: Awful Stuff
Posted: Mar 9th, '19, 12:14
by Adalrico
Cute.)))))))