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 Post subject: Re: The Ethereal Saloon
Posted: Aug 10th, '13, 03:34    


goshops

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Yes yes, get better Nan's neck!

Amanda! XD

That's not my influence! :mcwink:

Sure, I'd just have to scan it in, or take a picture... or dig out my tablet and try drawing her digitally. And the bust is the chest, shoulders, and head~ So you're partially right... and boobs are sometimes called the bust... and large "busted" girls are called "busty"... so I don't blame you~
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 Post subject: Re: The Ethereal Saloon
Posted: Aug 10th, '13, 03:55    


jadepanda-ai

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she looks cool *nods*

that would be funny if she met someone who insisted on calling her "Shi-chan' without her permission lol
just a random guy she finds annoying, or a younger female classmate who loves people, just runs up and goes "SHI-CHAN!! how are you, shi-chan? we should hang out Shi-chan" lol

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 Post subject: Re: The Ethereal Saloon
Posted: Aug 10th, '13, 04:00    


goshops

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That's what I was thinking. Some guy that she can't stand starts getting friendly with her and calls her Shi-chan, not because he hears her friends call her that, but it's shorter and easier to say... and he's lazy. And he somehow nullifies her powers, so her attacks on him don't really do anything. And over time she starts to fall for him, though she gets totally tsundere and doesn't admit it, but it's painfully obvious to everyone except him~

Maybe I'll name him Kenshin~

And thanks!

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 Post subject: Re: The Ethereal Saloon
Posted: Aug 10th, '13, 04:58    


jadepanda-ai

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lolol
that's like one of my older characters, his name was Yuki Kurai
but he preferred people call him by his last name, mainly because he kind of hated people, so whenever someone (even his teacher) goes "Yuki-kun, how are you today?"
he'll basically just snap and go, "You have no right calling me by that name, to you and everyone else, I am Kurai."

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 Post subject: Re: The Ethereal Saloon
Posted: Aug 10th, '13, 05:19    


goshops

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Ah, my inspiration comes from Kamijou Touma from Toaru Kagaku/Majutsu no Railgun/Index. He's kind of relaxed, though always suffering from bad luck... noble and stands up for others and stays true to himself. And gives Misaka Mikoto the nickname Biribiri, instead of calling her the Railgun or Misaka or Mikoto.

If you haven't seen those series, I recommend them! There are two for Index, one for Railgun and a second side-ish story for Railgun airing now~

/edit, I'm going, niiight~

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 Post subject: Re: The Ethereal Saloon
Posted: Aug 10th, '13, 06:14    


jadepanda-ai

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sleep well, Steven! :D

aaaaaahhhh, I finished reading a short manga series called Doubt! it only has two books to it, but omg!! it sucked me in so much near the end, because I had my suspicions, then everything was all twisted and stuff, but then it turned out I was right with my original thinking! :mcomg:
I was still super shocked at the end though! :mcomg:

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 Post subject: Re: The Ethereal Saloon
Posted: Aug 10th, '13, 08:22    


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Amanda: Oh I'm reading Doubt ^^ So no spoilers! >.<

Steven: It feels like you made that character with lightning speed D: Why do you make it seem so easy?!?!

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 Post subject: Re: The Ethereal Saloon
Posted: Aug 10th, '13, 12:04    


goshops

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Cause sometimes things click and it is super easy!

Actually, the only thing I struggle with for new OC's is coming up with their names~
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I still have two, named Andromaeda (Mae) and Aether from an original story about androids living in the future. AI had become so advanced that robots took over and humans have been pushed to the edges of society, there is no place for them. As a result, humans have started to devolve back into wild beasts lacking the intelligence that we have today; though they are still extremely smart, they don't have all the technology that we have and sort of live like nomads.

The androids have no wars, no sickness, etc. it is peaceful but a highly stratified society, the poor have no chance of becoming wealthy. Once a year they have human hunts, where groups of androids go out and hunt humans to cull the population. They do nothing with the bodies, as androids don't have to eat-unlike cyborgs. Andromaeda and Aether are the children of a poor man that became famous in a sport and he married into an extremely wealthy family. Their mother died when they were extremely young and so he, Marcus, raised them by himself. Andromaeda is extremely smart, actually both are, but Mae is more humble and thinks about others. Aether is extremely selfish and is resentful of her sister because Mae gets all the attention. She was ignored growing up because Marcus kept doting on Mae.
Actually, I have some rough drafts on dA, I'll link them so you can read~
Feedback would be greatly appreciated! And hard to believe it's been like 3 years since I've worked on that story~

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 Post subject: Re: The Ethereal Saloon
Posted: Aug 10th, '13, 17:41    


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Andromaeda... is such a unique name! I like it :D

I didn't read the whole story, because I can't seem to finish it. I rather have it in short stories :/ But it depends on the plot I guess. Some are more fit to be longer, while others are fit to be shorter.

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 Post subject: Re: The Ethereal Saloon
Posted: Aug 10th, '13, 18:34    


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This was intended to be a novel or novella, not a short story. But I got started writing and ran out of juice and it's been sitting since. I don't know where to go with it, or how to progress.

That's partially why I provided a summary, though if you do read it, I'd greatly appreciate feedback~

And in the world of that story, noble androids are named after Deity's, Mythology, or Celestial objects, Aether is a Greek God of Pure Air, the air that Gods and Goddesses breathe, not normal air that humans breathe, though I made he a she and I feel her personality comes across very well, being stuck up and egotistical and Andromeda is the daughter of a goddess and is the most beautiful woman, ever. So much that Poseidon got jealous and started attacking her home village, where she was to be sacrificed to Poseidon to appease him, but she was rescued by Perseus~

/loves mythology

Oh yeah?
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Mae, during her college years, goes off for her thesis to study the humans and starts interacting with one and falls in love, then she sets out to stop the brutality against humans and end the human hunts. That the humans are actually the creators of androids many thousands of years ago... but the other androids don't believe it because present humans aren't that smart to join together in a civilized society, let alone create an AI of their level. Mae ends up becoming a martyr and is killed as a human lover, then Aether, who has an epiphany and begins to understand Mae, instead of hating her, takes up her cause and starts to change society to be nicer to humans.
I imagined it being told like the Princess Bride, actually~

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