For one, the fingers have a point on them, like a sharp rock. You tried to round them out I'm sure, but because the hand couldn't be done in excessive detail, it ended that way.

Now of course perhaps you meant to have the eye visible through the hair covering it, but that gives me a message of confusion. The hair is there, no doubt, yet the eye is staring straight through it like it doesn't even exist. I think it would have been better if it wasn't drawn that way. Unless you were in fact going for a look of a friendly person, because you did manage to gain that.

Yeah those are all things because I'm doing traditional work. XD
For the eye thing If you look at people which hair covering the eye, sometimes you can see threw the hair if they have them hair. But not as visible there. If I was doing digital I would have liked to add a partly transparent layer over it do it looked like it was behind the hair. But I should have just not drawn the eye there i have to agree. XD I was in a bit of hurry when I made it. > w >;
Thanks for the critic! =3 I'll be thinking these things next time.


Moi - OK.

You realize it's spelled "through" right? Threw, is past tense, to have thrown something. Through is like see-through, transparent.

OK you can critic my art, just not my spelling and typos. ^_^;
I have reading and weighting disabilities. It makes me feel bad when I get over corrected in those things. *hinds in corner*

Sorry KC. Permission to pull you out of the corner and serve you a fine drink and a snack?

Snack make KC fat. I'll have water though.

*brings you a bottle of water* Here you are. By the way... it would be fair to call you captian now, wouldn't it? Seeing as this is your ship.

That can be Captian KC to you! Arrr! XD

Only if you want to call me that, I'm fine with it. =3

I like your art, KC! I didn't know before that you were an artist.